Last year Brittany and I did our AS level based around a poem and this year will be no different, we are both avid lovers of poetry and enjoy writing lines, I am not a very confident writer as I tend to take criticism to the heart (for anyone that read the perfectionist post… yeah) so I try to stay away from showing my poems as much as possible.
when looking at how I want this poem to come across I did some research on sleep paralysis and others perceptions of what sleep paralysis is like, within my own poem there is hints and obvious hints to the sleep paralysis, one poem said
This poem to me is a sum of the feeling of sleep paralysis the disturbance that comes with it and constant fight with the mind and the body, this inspired some of the lines in my own poetry for example “my lungs are full of water but I am not drowning”, I have also taken inspiration from the imagery of the photography Bruno when adding in this metaphors
Anyway I will keep this short as the poem itself is quite long, I recommend you listen to the poetry rather than read it as different emphasis on different words change the meaning but you do you!
Deception is a clasp to the dark
Where my screams don’t echo
But my lungs feel blank
This reality you say is not real is pricking my fingertip
Like a rose that has no flower
This is a masquerade of the iris
The dance that ends in death
That I shall stay paralysed
When she arrives by my bed
The thought of feeling everything makes me want to feel nothing
I want to blend with white that has no annotations of black
I’m thrashing but to you they look like shivers
But I’m not scared of being cold
A tunnel to hell is perceived as the light
My thoughts rejected by my own body
My lungs are full of water but I am not drowning
My dress is soaked but I am not wearing clothing
I don’t see you when the dawn hits my bed
But retract that motion and I feel you on my chest
I am scared but my heart beats no faster
As I know I am the slave and you are my master
I will carry on wearing my chains
As long as I carry on breathing
And even then who knows what the true reality is
How do you know the demons I see are not lurking behind you
You can not see everything but apparently I can
Why can you believe in Christ but I cant believe in Satan
Do not tell me I am mistaken as there breathe down my neck
Feels just as real as the wind
There laughter in my ears
Makes me want in on the joke
Are we laughing at my misfortune
Or are we laughing at my chains
That I locked to myself and the key was never forged
I imagine it would be gold
As that’s a colour I dream to see
My dreams are so rich with vision but so numb to a palette
They started out as two paths interlocked by a connection
But as that connection from the reality blurred
I failed to see the difference
And confused your dance for mine
As I spun mindlessly awake
They scream we are all unique
But will mould you into a structure
And if you do not fit then you must pretend that you are a
Heroic overcoming the fears
Or isn’t that so tragic
You look at me as if I begged on the floor for your pity
That I took your hand and kissed it gracefully
When in reality or perhaps not in reality
I cant quite make up my mind
You see they change
Not to you, I don’t know what you see
But I see a chain of animalistic bodies all tied by their eyes
All screaming the same words
Deception is a clasp to the dark
Where my echo’s don’t scream